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A Starry Finish Line...

what will your heaven be? with who will it be shared? I promise you will see who really cared a sunrise or sunset? an ocean or field? friends you have met is fate made or sealed? will it be on a starry ground? or maybe a moonlit conversation? simple happiness will be found along with your final destination

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 9:19:00 PM
What a soft sweet contemplation. I want mine to be full of trees and hills, smiles and thankful hearts
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Date: 4/12/2009 6:58:00 AM
love the great title! and wistful poem! Luke, thanks for comments, the redwinged blackbird is my favorite plaintive tune too! I sat overlooking a swamp near my house and listened to their calls all afternoon yest.! Best! Jim
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