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A Stare Down

A Stare Down My entire day was saved (maybe more) By a smiling crow with a steel grip On a pine branch in a snow storm. I sat very comfortably at the glass door, Loving the teasing snowflakes, And sipping steaming coffee. There he was (or she was) A pointed silhouette In green and white winter salad, Flapping and bobbing-- A challenge to the winter storm. I tapped the glass and he smiled to a point And twisted to stare at me. Two can play this game, I thought. So, we played and played till the glass fogged. I wiped some fog away. He shrugged and smiled and fluttered away-- A shrinking dot in the marshmallow morning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/31/2015 1:38:00 AM
Calvin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:09:00 AM
Calvin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:19:00 PM
My entire day was saved with your wonderful poem.Thank you.Enjoy the day.
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Date: 1/27/2015 5:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your poem!!!Charma
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