A Star

Even through this aching My joy shines on through Called me a star in a blighted sky He called me a star, a star My aching, though small, fades away

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2011 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations J. I like this poem J.Tank you for sharing. OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/13/2011 6:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win, J. Kim

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/13/2011 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win J :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/13/2011 1:55:00 AM

Congratulations x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2011 9:40:00 PM

Wonderful poem, J! Congratulations on your win.

J. Dover
Date: 12/15/2011 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Debbie!

J. Dover
Date: 12/15/2011 11:15:00 AM

oops, wrong person ;/

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/12/2011 5:49:00 PM

Hey J. you have Free Verse here or you may call it just Verse..Blank verse has meter as well as not having end rhyme and I'm so glad the aching has faded! Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2011 3:03:00 PM

JD. congrats on your win, great flow to this ..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 12:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest J. Love, Carol