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A Spring Hike

A winter white blanket melts turning Aspens verdant green. Buds sprout on mountainsides in a sunlit golden sheen. Clouds like fresh-picked cauliflower sink low and drift on by. Distant sun after her show takes a bow in purple sky. Each eager bear escapes its hibernating cage. Frozen waters thaw flowing to shores of sage. Gift of welcomed warmth rids us of icy skin. Happily we hike the trails, feeling like nature’s kin. Iridescent dew drops cling to shoots of leaves on trees. Joyous sparrows sing of birth, building their nests with ease. Kaleidoscopes of color blossom, grow and softly sway. Lifting to the heavens high, our spirits soar today. Miracles of spring’s renewal, God creates for us each year. Nights curtail and days extend as bustling young appear. Open fields expand brightly; in the air, fragrance floats. Poppies, peonies and petunias cover meadows like a coat. Quizzical eyes peer at us from a shadowed hiding place. Rabbits romp and hop together through fields of English lace. Spring reverberates with humming birds and buzzing bees, temped by sweet nectar of wildflowers on the breeze. Under mounds of driven snow, earth’s waited to tumble green. Victorious in her grand arrival, spring’s beauty grows pristine. Watching from steep ridges, wolves save their howling song. Xanthic petals mesmerize as we alertly walk along. Yesterday’s cold winter pales with every step we take. Zealous spring day warms the soul, our senses stirred awake. written for Shadow's Abecedarian Contest, 2/13/15

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Date: 3/2/2015 12:56:00 AM
Very lovely write Rhonda,, one can rise in love wid ur words of positivity here,, congrats on big win!!
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:07:00 PM
A very well deserved win, dearie!! Congrats. I loved it the first time I saw it.
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:09:00 AM
You make me ready for spring! Grats on your win~!
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:17:00 AM
Rhonda, a wonderful romp through the awakenings of spring. Congrats on the high placement (aka the win).
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:53:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your poem taking top honors. I loved the hike through the splendors of spring!
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:17:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/27/2015 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Kaleidoscopes of color blossom. 7 Blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful done. congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/27/2015 12:52:00 PM
Congrats !!! Sara
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:24:00 AM
Hi Ronda, a big congratulations to you for your First Place win for your lovely poem about Spring! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:20:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:05:00 AM
you really nailed this form Rhonda it is exquisite congrats on your 1st place hugs
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Date: 2/21/2015 8:05:00 PM
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Date: 2/14/2015 7:41:00 AM
Well I have had my exercise for the day! I feel like I just took a hike. Your images are so beautiful, vibrant, and mesmerizing.Fantastic!
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:45:00 AM
wow! it's smooth and it soothes. words are perfectly woven and i know it's hard to do that but it glides effortlessly in my mouth as i read it. and love the images painted here! great work, Rhonda!
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:49:00 PM
You really did well with the form, Rhonda. it is such a HARD one to do. i did one a long time ago and it took me ages. What i wish is that we did not have to use the stupid X. And i wish there were a way to do it with stanzas! anyway, yours ROcks because you have many lovely images in it and the style is so flowing.
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Date: 2/13/2015 5:16:00 PM
wow, rhonda, you have really nailed this one! it's hard enough writing in this format, but your rhyme is spot-on as well, which is no easy task. bravo!
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Date: 2/13/2015 3:21:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, describing how beautiful spring is. I will wish you luck in the contest, but I do not think you will need it. You will be the winner with this poem. Janet
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:29:00 PM
This is a most excellent poem, Rhonda! I won't be surprised in this doesn't receive top spot in the contest! This is a delightful description of springtime! :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/13/2015 3:14:00 PM
LOL, Laura...I knew what you meant. Thanks!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/13/2015 2:30:00 PM
I meant "I would be surprised...." sorry about that (trying to compliment you!)
Date: 2/13/2015 1:54:00 PM
This is a winner in my eyes - I too have used Xanthic - I had never heard of it before yesterday lol. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/13/2015 2:00:00 PM
LOL...me, too! Thanks to Shadow, we learned a new word. Thanks, Jan. I'll be visiting poems tonight after the kids go to bed. Hugs, Rhonda

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