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A Splendid Spring Day

Beauty fills my eyes on this fine Spring day, where nothing seems off kilter or amiss, a breeze tickles tulips until they sway. Butterflies emerge as though they're at play, now set free from their metamorphosis. Beauty fills my eyes on this fine Spring day. Flowers bloom in an enchanting array. Their fragrance gives me cause to reminisce a breeze tickles tulips until they sway. Bees sip nectar, when from a hive they stray. With care, Mother Nature is not remiss. Beauty fills my eyes on this fine Spring day. Clouds are gray. A shower is on its way to quench the thirst of blossoms with a kiss. a breeze tickles tulips until they sway. My sanctuary has a bright display, I find peace in my backyard oasis. Beauty fills my eyes on this fine Spring day. a breeze tickles tulips until they sway. April 7, 2022 Springtime Villanelle Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/9/2022 1:39:00 PM
WoW! Jenna, This is gorgeous. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Alexis.
Date: 5/6/2022 8:24:00 PM
Great images. Beautiful photo added too. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, a whole lot, Chris.
Date: 5/6/2022 11:48:00 AM
Jenna, Congratulations on winning first place in my contest. You've written a Wonderful, flawless poem. Blessings.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/21/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Lasaad.
Date: 4/8/2022 6:27:00 AM
Splendid indeed, Jenna:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/8/2022 6:43:00 AM
Hi Jo, and thank you.
Date: 4/7/2022 9:57:00 PM
Absolutely exquisite, Jenna. I loved it but, of course, I am biased toward any villanelle. But this one is exceptional!!! I loved the way you weaved through the flowers and wound up pointing out it is your backyard sanctuary. Lovely!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/8/2022 6:43:00 AM
You are always so supportive of my poetry, Milt. I want to sincerely thank you for being so encouraging, and for your detailed comments. Thank You!
Date: 4/7/2022 1:24:00 PM
Your photo pic and words really hit the season...inspired to enjoy
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/7/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thanks so very much for such kind thoughts, ray.
Date: 4/7/2022 1:07:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery~such a delight to read. And your photo so inviting~how about a cup of tea? Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/7/2022 2:00:00 PM
I would love to share a spot of tea with you, Paulette. You can help me plan where to build a fountain. Thanks so much.

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