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A Splash of Love

Waves lap at their feet As they enjoy the sunset Walking hand in hand Framed by love's warm silhouette As the sun kisses the sea Tanka 2 Contest

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Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/30/2015 4:27:00 AM

Cheers to romance! Congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/24/2015 10:44:00 AM

I love the romantic image you created here, Joseph. Very enjoyable Tanka #7. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:57:00 PM

JOSEPH, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2015 9:35:00 PM

Hey, Joseph. Tanka do not really have titles, but I really found the title you gave this adorable. This is sweet. Congrats. (Wish you would not capitalize the lines of your tanka!)

Joseph May
Date: 3/21/2015 10:43:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Andrea..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2015 3:51:00 AM

- Sweet and romantic, Joseph! - I wish you a beautiful spring day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/17/2015 7:39:00 PM

Wonderful imagery of love that "splashes" from daylight through sunsets, twilight and in the light of the moon. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Louis Brown

Date: 3/17/2015 4:18:00 PM

a touching write..keep bringing it and god bless you