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A Spirit One With the Universe Contest

Step away from all you know, Travel far and just let go, Appreciate where you are going, Imagine yourself simply just flowing, Rain is not water it’s the feeling of being rejuvenated, Whispers of love are like the wind but illuminated, All the pleasures of life are now one continuous feeling, Your breathing has become endless breaths of utter healing, Telescopes aren’t needed for you now dance in vast galaxies, Oceans are no longer separated but are now part of you and me, Thirst is obsolete for desires are permanently fulfilled, Humanity's longings have been instantly stilled, Everlasting joy bubbles out of your voice, Saturated in peace without it being a choice, Tiredness is now lifted for you are energized and restored, Angel’s wings surround you electrifying every shore, Repositioned to partake in everlasting delight, Since the night is now day and the day consumes the night. By: Sabina Nicole Contest; Stairway to the stars

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Date: 2/28/2012 5:03:00 PM
Great news Sabine..! good to see the win here
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Sabina. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 6:41:00 AM
Beautiful Acrostic by you Sabina.Enjoyed the read.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations Sanina enjoyed this a lot, well done xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:13:00 PM
Congrats Sabina on a sweet success for this incredible write and entry luv.. thankxxx for supporting too..
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Date: 2/20/2012 9:19:00 AM
good luck in contest have a nice day ~always *P.D.
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:30:00 PM
This is a very well written acrostic. You have all the ingredients for an admirable work.
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 7:38:00 PM
thank you:)

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