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A Spirit In Her Ear

Love maker, Body taker Love shaker, Hot whisper, Peppermint & jasmine in air Tickling every body hair, Reverberating into the Queen's chamber, A tiger's den teething to be, Safety in no layer, romance the pillar of this prayer, Our auras igniting flower vases ablaze To compliment our shadows, Personas fevered with juiced up joy, We both played Aces, Mine the Spade her's the Diamond, Together we make an Ace of Heart's place, Caprice keeping hold of Club's Ace, She exhales stars from a mouth murmuring for moments of senseless beauty, Purring for pleasure painted with a kiss, Illuminating my frame with pixied permission Unharnessed we are, as spontaneity seduces strategy, Craving the next second like atoms in a spin for sin, Feeling each other in ways undefined Unrefined, simply, lustfully, Loyal to needs supernatural, Gifted in gritty game, Rubbing her rose with fingertips of cool flame, Giving her the wand that was once only mine, As lovers now, belonging to Poetry's promise, Complete partners, reunited treasures - J.A.B.

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/19/2014 1:09:00 PM

Justin....Love undefined, unrefined....is beautiful. Loved this passionate write. I reread Rebel Girl as well....Just breathtaking!

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/19/2014 8:27:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your breath with me, along with the breadth of your sophisticated soul Beloved Poetess. Raw passion has no confession or suppression, it simply seeks like heat. I am inspired by your enthusiasm for my work Eileen...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/20/2014 4:22:00 PM

:) vividly written.. :) pleasure to read and picture.. :) :) :) great!====olive_eloi wth big dreamy eyes :D

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/23/2014 1:24:00 AM

An intense connection indeed. Reunited treasures! Thanks Olive. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/28/2014 6:19:00 AM

You've really set up very colorful, erotic and memorable imagery in this one. Lines that stoo out to me most-- "Feeling each other in ways undefined.." and Loyal to needs supernatural"...very interesting piece. Looks like you had a lot of fun with it. Wonderful work. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/28/2014 1:40:00 PM

Yeah Laura, many special things in life are undefinable. Thanks so much for visiting again, and quoting your favorite parts! I get excited about the Aces!!! J.A.B.

Julie Heckman

Date: 1/27/2014 1:20:00 PM

nice wright...enjoyed reading. look forward to more.

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/27/2014 8:44:00 PM

Its all here waiting for you Julie, thanks. J.A.B.

David Williams

Date: 1/26/2014 7:21:00 AM

Justin an excellent piece of work, exhaling stars from the mouth is a great image...David

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/27/2014 12:23:00 AM

Indeed it is David, thank you. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2014 8:14:00 PM

Justin, this is very nice. It's an honor knowing I inspired the poem. A relentless write, ready to smile again. I can't help but find myself highly in awe's by the naturalistic view of this poem. . Always & Forever --- LINDA

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/25/2014 12:52:00 PM

Your smile, and passion for life are wrapped tightly around my heart LINDA, the melody and instinct of your eyes a staple for my soul. The honor is equally mine my Sphinx. The stars glow your name tonight. Forever Yours, J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2014 2:25:00 PM

- A pleasure to read ..... A really wonderful poem, Justin. - Have a enjoyable weekend, enjoy! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/25/2014 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Anne. It will be difficult to be happy this weekend, with PD.'s departure from the community, but the memory of her charm and competitiveness will help keep many of us warm and driven. Linda has elegantly shown us how to defend ourselves with unabashed self respect. J.A.B.