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A Spectacular Sight

In one's life they can be taken by surprise I mean totally caught off guard It didn't come instantly I have not fully arrived Because there's so much to uncover There's so much to explore I'm in good space and this feels good Is it love? I'm certain that it is But in its beginning stage What's in my heart can be compared to a flower bud That has not bloomed all the way But when is in full bloom it will be a spectacular sight I wrote you this love note to say I've fallen in love with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/11/2016 1:23:00 PM
A very well written love note.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 1:30:00 PM
Hi Afzal, Thank you very much. I hope he thinks so too. I appreciate the support: -) Alexis
Date: 11/18/2016 11:38:00 AM
Wow! This poem sizzles, Alexis. You got the whole package on this one. The imagery, the passion, the meter and the engaging foreplay w/hint of future romantic foray. Great poem, sista. Love always.
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:18:00 PM
a wonderful little love poem, Alexis!
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Date: 11/17/2016 2:38:00 PM
- Oh, so sweet Alexis - A beautiful poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 2:36:00 PM
So beautiful!
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Date: 11/17/2016 2:33:00 PM
There is no greater feeling : )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/17/2016 2:37:00 PM
No sure which one of us she meant was spectacular!!! LOL
Date: 11/17/2016 2:03:00 PM
Yes very beautiful x well written x
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Date: 11/17/2016 1:55:00 PM
This once again is absolutely beautiful Alexis. This is a poem I would love to receive from an amazing woman like yourself. I hope he read this and it touches his heart as it has mine.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/17/2016 1:59:00 PM
Aww. Thank you so much. That was a nice thing to say. I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Date: 11/17/2016 12:08:00 PM
how you romance the page, alexis!... i am moon-enthralled!...huggs
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