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A Special Letter

Sorry that the postman didn't come today; To deliver you a letter I wish not to be delay'd, But I sent the birds to give it to you. In the sky they held it, and above they flew. It happened that the letter was blown It rested on a lost ship with the flown, But the man there began to acclaim Because they were your candles that flam'd And up he gets to your house To tell you by the bones of his mouth: Happy Birthday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/22/2017 8:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, I mainly like it because of the imaginations you ve put in this poem, secondly your feelings are prettu clear, I can see that how important that person is to you, a very touching poem, well can you do me a favour, can you plz read my poems also and tell me how they are, I ll really appreciate it
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Date: 6/21/2015 10:04:00 PM
This poem is humorous!
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:27:00 AM
I surely did not guess the last line, beautiful poem, and a quite frankly I dream one day of such a letter!
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Sandy Tadros
Date: 5/30/2015 12:31:00 AM
Thank you :) And actually, we are all waiting for such a letter :')
Date: 5/28/2015 12:05:00 PM
a touching write. Sandy, I enjoyed the words you decided to use to rhyme in each set of couplets. LINDA
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Sandy Tadros
Date: 5/28/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot! I am trying my best :)
Date: 5/27/2015 5:57:00 PM
Sandy, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT"
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Sandy Tadros
Date: 5/28/2015 4:25:00 AM
Thanks :')
Date: 5/27/2015 10:45:00 AM
Loved this piece Sandy, A nice enjoyable write Best Wishes Kevin
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Sandy Tadros
Date: 5/27/2015 11:04:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)

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