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A Special Gift

The most special of feelings, Is a newborn baby clinging. This is when a woman is just a woman! In her soul love engraving, This newborn her everything, She loves this precious life beginning, Birth her special gift because only a woman can, Make a baby . . . This is when a woman is just a woman! _____________________________ May 30, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/A Special Gift Copyright Protected, 05-678-488-30 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard Contest, When A Woman Is Just A Woman, HM, Judged 2015

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Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win:)Alexis

James Fraser

Date: 6/6/2015 9:46:00 AM

The most wonderful feat of engineering on planet earth. Yes we guys played our part, but it's the woman that takes such to the highest of levels, and that's childbirth. Love this poem 'Broken Wings' it's absolutely beautiful. Good luck in the contest, James xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/4/2015 4:07:00 PM

That is so true dear friend,and a newborn is the best gift,a gift no money can buy , lovely poem.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:02:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/3/2015 9:03:00 AM

Broken wings, your poem exclaims a full blossomed woman! beautiful!~olive eloisa =')

Robert Nehls

Date: 6/1/2015 1:49:00 AM

Hi Broken Wings. This is truly a wonderful poem in a very tender and loving way. I believe that the "Just" word may be the reason that there are negative thoughts about this contest title. It's like saying the wind is just the wind or God is just God. Doesn't make sense to me. The scene that you have written about in your poem is possibly the greatest part of this complex life we are living. Well done.... Robert.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2015 2:22:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Creative way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/31/2015 12:17:00 PM

Broken, I love the way you address this theme in such a loving and positive light. I agree with Laura below, that I too saw it in a negative light (which I may still address in my own poem), but your interpretation with such lovely words of emotion and truth images this meaning of the theme so well. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/31/2015 12:10:00 PM

Love it, Constance! For guys too, I nite-fed my daughters...potty-trained 12 & 15 mos. & they're both doin great! Good poem! jim

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2015 8:42:00 AM

a lovely take on the theme Broken wings - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/31/2015 12:15:00 AM

Brilliant, BR! I admit when I saw the title of this contest I was seeing it in a negative light. But you opened up a beautiful concept and I love it! 7!