A Spanish Autumn

To the rhythm of Spanish castanets The tempestuous autumn wind beat the mosaic of colorful leaves into a twirling, swirling flamenco dance © Brenda V Northeast rewrite- 24th 2012 - 26/05/08

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2012 6:24:00 PM

Brenda, i feel like spanish famingo all of a sudden... lol... I love it... the dancing and swirling leaves all around.. always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2012 12:15:00 AM

wowie, I REALLY dig this kind of little verse. I am sure it could easily fit some type of Asian verse scheme if you wanted it to!!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/24/2012 12:20:00 AM

I need to learn or be mentored to understand all of the different poetry forms- I find it quiet difficult to get my head around them on my own. Thank you for your kind comments Andrea, blessings, Bren: )