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A Spaceship Called Enchantment

The sun shines brightly every day While the moon shines nightly above But the stars reside in your gentle eyes Like sparkling diamonds of love On a spaceship called “Enchantment” We sail the placid seas of bliss Wrapped in the arms of the goddess of love Enraptured by the warmth of each kiss Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies On a collision course of emotions Destined to be joined in celestial union Filled with great love and devotion There's no greater feeling than mutual love That poets strive to capture in rhyme The ultimate emotion known to man A feeling of joy so sublime The sun shines brightly every day While the moon shines nightly above But the stars reside in your gentle eyes My darling, my obsession, my love © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 7/15/2015 6:59:00 PM
I feel like I have read this one before. All in all, it is a beautiful masterpiece, Jack. I love your romantic ones! After all, I am a hopeless romantic at heart. Always, Laura
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:18:00 PM
I have a special place in my heart for "hopeless romantics" WELCOME IN! I love you, Laura my sweet! xxx
Date: 7/4/2015 11:06:00 AM
We're all in a state of Enchantment here... For 2 days we have found the SUN!!!! Yeah!... It's so cool!!! Think the rains finally behind us today... or hope so. Usually get 4-5 inches rain. In May got 9.42 inches. June gave us 13.14 inches. Broke a record with that one... But still can't seem to get the umbrellas out of the penguins flippers... They seem to have become a fashion accessory... LOL... PS. We have a new appreciation for that sun... at least for a little while...
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:16:00 PM
Just belt out, "Singing in the Rain!" LOL xxx
Date: 7/3/2015 11:19:00 AM
A nice, romantic write for a change...Good one, Jack! :-)
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:51:00 PM
Did I write that!!! WOW! Must have been in a real mellow mood eh!!! LOL Glad you liked it Kimmie! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 7/3/2015 7:03:00 AM
Oh No...this is to mushy for me Jack....I gotta go and haunt somebody else....
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:11:00 AM
Mushy is good but maybe it's too early in the morning for that kind of stuff! Wait a minute, it's NEVER to early for messing around!!! Jack... Jack... calm down, YOUR HEART!!! xxxxxxxx

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