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A Soul's Fantasy

The warmth of a summer dream shines tenderly, as red petals of love blanket a soul; thawing the bitter chill about her heart and revives this spirit with passion and love before she awakens. ©Ana Espinola Collins

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2014 5:07:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by my work and reading..Welcome to soup...Sara

Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 11/26/2014 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Sara for your sweet comment...it means a lot to me :) Ana

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2014 5:02:00 PM

this is really beautiful. Did you mean red petals, as in flower petals? I love that image.

Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 11/26/2014 7:04:00 PM

Yes I did....I just corrected the spelling...I can't believe I did that...thanks so much for the heads up Andrea and for your comment :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2014 4:13:00 PM

This is lovely as a poem and for its positivity. You show well the change from sadness to joy. I'd like to see the look on her face when she awakens! // Love the avatar, too, Ana:) #7 // paul

Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 11/26/2014 7:16:00 PM

Some things Paul have to be left to the imagination..lol... Thanks for this wonderful compliment...it made my day! :) Ana

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/26/2014 4:50:00 AM

Soft, beautiful, and so romantic. This makes me think of Sleeping Beauty waiting for her prince.

Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 11/26/2014 7:07:00 PM

Wow...Never thought of it that way, but I like it! Thanks Monterey for visiting :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/23/2014 6:55:00 PM

I came by to read this gem again! Thank you!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/22/2014 10:31:00 PM

Beautiful, the poem and the poet!

Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 11/23/2014 1:43:00 PM

Such a beautiful comment Arthur...thank you so much...you inspire me to keep writing :)