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A Songbird's Ode To Autumns Gone

As winter's gloom descends upon the trees Autumn slumbers 'neath the fallen leaves Spring's distant dream is yet to be perceived As trees weep in the cold silence of their grief Autumn slumbers 'neath the fallen leaves As a lone bird sings a melancholy song The trees weep in the cold silence of their grief To a songbird's ode to autumns gone As a lone bird sings a melancholy song A sad song within my heart is born As I hear the songbird's ode to autumns gone That echoes in the twilight until morn A sad song within my heart is born As winter's frost through the forest spawns The songbird's ode to autumn echoes until morn Before it takes its envied flight to warmer dawns As winter's frost through the forest spawns Spring's distant dream is yet to be perceived Then the songbird takes its envied flight to warmer dawns As winter's gloom descends upon the trees ~~ Joseph May ----------------------------------------------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/12/2017 2:34:00 PM
Very well written Pantoum this is Joseph. Excellent! I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:20:00 AM
I am congratulating you on your win in Linda's contest.
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:36:00 AM
Well done David.
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Joseph May
Date: 4/9/2014 10:00:00 AM
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:36:00 AM
A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, joseph
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Date: 4/9/2014 8:53:00 AM
Very well written Joseph! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:38:00 AM
JOSEPH, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Joseph. Verlena
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Date: 2/13/2014 6:35:00 AM
Nice poem! Congrats Joseph on your win!!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:26:00 AM
A great write and congrats on the win, joseph
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Date: 2/10/2014 10:18:00 AM
Way to go with this awesome work..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2014 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Sara
Date: 2/10/2014 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph. I enjoyed the imagery.
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Date: 2/10/2014 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph another great write xx
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2014 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Mandy
Date: 2/9/2014 10:04:00 PM
It's a pleasure to have come across this gem of yours today, read and dropped by. Big congrats to you on your deserved win, Joseph! Well done!!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2014 1:56:00 PM
Thank you AO...
Date: 2/9/2014 7:37:00 PM
This is wonderful, Joseph......and you have honored Andrea by choosing one of hers to inspire you! Just lovely......congratulations!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/9/2014 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Carrie
Date: 2/9/2014 6:18:00 PM
Yayyyyy, can you hear me clapping?? I am so happy this one is at the top!!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/9/2014 7:08:00 PM
I will return the applause to you for the inspiration....Yaaaay
Date: 1/25/2014 6:29:00 AM
I love it! In case you didn't know, I live in the woods...and you have captured the emotion of the season. Very nice. Pantoum is one of my favorite forms of poetry and you have done a great job on this one. Good luck in the contest. I think you'll do well!
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Joseph May
Date: 1/25/2014 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Dane...I enjoyed your Pantoum about building castles ...hugs
Date: 1/21/2014 8:58:00 AM
The rhyme, the emotion, the change.the transcending, all bundled in greatness! Excellent Joseph! My best, chuck
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Joseph May
Date: 1/21/2014 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Chuck, I appreciate your comments
Date: 1/20/2014 3:32:00 AM
- So beautiful / touching that it gives me goosebumps, Joseph. - Luck i contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/20/2014 11:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne..always a pleasure to see you...hugs
Date: 1/19/2014 7:39:00 PM
A soft and sweet sorrow, well done. Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 1/19/2014 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Debbie...Always good to see you...Autumn's departure is but a soft sweet sorrow...
Date: 1/19/2014 10:45:00 AM
Seeing it again. And glad how much Gail liked it!! thanks for choosing my poems as your inspiration, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/19/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..I am glad Gail loved it too..I think this is the 2nd time I've used one of your poems as inspiration for a contest..hugs
Date: 1/18/2014 10:36:00 AM
Very nice work on this poem Joseph. If for a contest I'm sure it will do well. I find them labor intensive, so i shy away.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/18/2014 7:21:00 PM
I think it all depends on how comfortable the writer is with the subject...Thank you for your comments Charles..much appreciated
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Charles Henderson
Date: 1/18/2014 1:07:00 PM
It's been a year at least but I'm pretty sure there were some groups of subjects that do much better than others. You have me curious now. Will have to dwell on that a bit. b ut at my age I'm scared to dwell to long
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Joseph May
Date: 1/18/2014 12:40:00 PM
That is so true Charles..I should have planned my last stanza before I even wrote the second..and I had to do a lot of editting due to that lack of planning ..
Date: 1/18/2014 3:37:00 AM
This is wonderful, Joseph!! yes, you captured the melancholy heart of it!! Always autumn makes me feel this way! (soupmail)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/18/2014 12:35:00 PM
Yes Autumn seems to have that effect on us.. .Thank you Andrea
Date: 1/18/2014 12:05:00 AM
Very descriptive with some admirable rhyming. A pleasure to read.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/18/2014 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Robert...I appreciate your comments

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