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I began amongst rocks a soft murmur chattering until I met the river _______________________ December 6, 2015 Tetractys Theme - a stream Written by Broken Wings For the contest, Language of Water Sponsor, Nette Onclaud First Place

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 12/20/2015 3:42:00 PM

Congrats on you rwin

Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2015 4:56:00 PM

Dave, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 9:31:00 PM

BROKEN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Skat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2015 3:18:00 PM

this is FANTASTIC, Constance. A very well deserved win. Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2015 3:30:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the congrats, I loved writing in this form, it was so inspiring to me ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place on the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2015 2:56:00 PM

Nayda thanks for the visit and the congratulations ~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/10/2015 10:42:00 PM

Congrats on ur wonderful write n first place win broken!

Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2015 4:43:00 AM

Upma, thanks so much for the congrats ~

Eve Roper

Date: 12/10/2015 9:44:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2015 4:44:00 AM

Eve, thank you for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/10/2015 1:49:00 PM

Lovely, Broken Wings, I can feel the flow with your words. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2015 4:05:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the congratulations, I am over the moon happy with first place

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/10/2015 10:54:00 AM

I love this! CayCay

Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2015 4:05:00 PM

Thank you so much CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2015 9:53:00 AM

What a lovely image, Constance! It's a pity that when the river is reached the chattering gets drowned in roaring sound!:) #7 Congrats on this high flying win! // paul

Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2015 4:07:00 PM

Paul thanks for the congrats, I was truly inspired with this write