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A Soft Kiss

As the sun plants a soft kiss, good bye And leaves its imprint upon an evening sky Rich reds, soft pink and violet hues At times observed by oh, so few He marks the path for sister moon For he knows that she will follow soon Countless stars accompanying her, shine ever bright! Across galaxies afar this coming night All creatures alive must stop their toil Seek rest, refresh and humbly extol What child-like wonder and surprise, this brings As captured is the perfect song that nature sings! ~*~ Annalise Brigham 7/20/10

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Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2013 4:55:00 AM

wonderful write Annalise....hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 7:29:00 PM

Annalise, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/22/2013 10:52:00 PM

So sweet and soft. Many congrats dear friend.

Joseph May

Date: 4/22/2013 8:49:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 8:55:00 PM

I was scrolling down and remembered this beautiful poem of yours. A fav for THIS one, Audrey!

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 7/15/2010 4:47:00 PM

loved this!..such great visuals you've created!!

Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/13/2010 10:15:00 AM

Wow sis! I though only I felt this way about kiss, let alone a sunset! Congrats on your win, and speakin of that, we should try doing a co-write if you won't mind, even though I truly feel I can't keep up with you!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 7/12/2010 11:23:00 AM

Wonderful capture in your words on the picture in Carolyn's contest, it's beautifully written >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:23:00 PM

Congrats on the 6th place win, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 5:11:00 PM

Soft and romantic writing in this entry, Audrey. Congratulations on your win!

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations, Audrey, on your poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 3:20:00 PM

Lovely indeed. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Amy Green

Date: 7/11/2010 1:17:00 PM

Exquisite... love this.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 11:57:00 AM

Love the imagery, especially the sun planting "a soft kiss," Audrey. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2010 10:32:00 AM

Night song. Love this write, Audrey...very melodic and smooth. Love, Dave

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/11/2010 10:26:00 AM

Beautifully written and impressive, Audrey...And thank you for your kind comments!...Love, Gert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/11/2010 5:15:00 AM

Nature is so beautiful, Audrey. Your appreciation and love for God's wonderful world are beautifully written in this poem. NOTE: Did I tell you that I am going to try to start commenting again? I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. Thanks for understanding. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Tarek Al Sabouni

Date: 7/11/2010 1:47:00 AM

beautiful .. thumbs up

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/11/2010 12:37:00 AM

Audrey, I just love the tranquility this piece takes me to.. Enjoy it tremendously, luv Wilma

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/10/2010 6:00:00 PM

Oh, how lovely is this one!! Is this a contest? It should be...I hope you have entered it in the Luna Goddess contest!! It is just lovely! ~ Carrie