Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

A Snazzy Day

Susan Mills Avatar Susan Mills - LIFETIME Premium Member Susan Mills - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A Snazzy Day which was written by poet Susan Mills. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Susan Mills

Best Susan Mills Poems

+ Fav Poet

A Snazzy Day

one snazzy day you walked by my way
I stopped for your number but couldn't stay

the sun touched your hair like angel wings
your halo from above, a gift you bring

to both of us cause your hearts so pure
our love will never die, for that I'm sure

your halo imparts gifts of tenderness and love
like white sunshine, you come from above

so, this poem I give with words to impart
my heart belongs to you and will never depart

your soft kindness and radiant love
I see you wholly and more with eyes of doves

never forget my words, hear my words
you are my comfort and company, my sword!

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/3/2010 7:23:00 PM
    Thanks for commenting on my poetry, a lovely love poem you have penned, I love that line, the sun touched your hair like angel wings.. love Constance

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 7:02:00 PM
    Very nice and creative piece on love and its feelings, susan

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 10:37:00 AM
    Very sweet poem, Susan, hope you are having a great Friday. LUv, Andrea