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She answered the door with delight in her eyes, as I gave her the plate with a piece of warm pie My afternoon's rushed, but she invites me to stay, and it's hard to say no, as she tries to delay I have glanced at my watch and the hour is late I must hurry home, but then, I stop, and hesitate For I know in my heart that her evenings alone, are shared only with records and yesterday's songs And I know what it means, that to be a good friend, takes the smallest of gestures, or an hour to lend _________________________________________________ Contest: "Neighbors" Sponsored by Mystic Rose 9/9/15

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Date: 1/24/2016 5:26:00 PM
Excellent couplet you've penned for a friend. From one to another.
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:30:00 PM
what a very good message in this one, CArrie. Excellent!
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:54:00 PM
Great entry & so true Carrie, I got your card ;) THANKS Light & Love
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:56:00 PM
Good luck Deb, hope you have great success selling your books ! :)
Date: 9/10/2015 2:33:00 AM
Very touching heartfelt write Carrie! Best is to give time to someone solitary howsoever little! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:24:00 PM
this is very touching, carrie! i especially love the ending couplet...
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