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A Small Silk Sachet

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The Eiffel tower stands gaunt, like a tall iron finger whose shadow petitions God for the right to scratch heaven. My girl loves me to woo her with polished charm and finesse, and yet, tonight, it's my turn to cash in on payments due. A diamond cuts the glass as I break into her rooms, and her perfumed decadence near makes me gag from the fumes. Rifling her jewelry box I find a small silk sachet, whiffs of potpourri wafting into the air at my touch. I decide to pocket it, and a smile crosses my lips, a small, scented memento, to remind me of this night. (Blank Verse) 1/28/2016

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Date: 5/13/2018 10:07:00 AM
Delightful imagery, Emile.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:12:00 PM
This poem reminds me of that classic movie "To Catch a Thief" with Cary Grant and Grace Kelly. Paris is the most beautiful city that exudes romance around every corner. I find the French language to be romantic as well. I enjoyed your first stanza the most which sets the mood...lovely! #7
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Date: 1/29/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Connie, that's the flavor I was going for...hell I didn't know what a "sachet" was till I wrote this. Wishing you nothing but the best. Emile.
Date: 1/28/2016 10:37:00 PM
Excellent Emile.. great pen!
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your supportive visits. Emile.

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