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A Slender Thread

There is a sense of one's own mortality, in this brittle light of a cold winter's day. There is a brave conspiracy, That exclaims to be gay. In this brittle light of a cold winter's day, be not deceived by any brilliant leaf of red, exclaiming to be gay. For life swings by a slender thread. Be not deceived by any brilliant leaf of red. The fire will wane and turn to dust. For life swings on a slender thread, and I must know this,....know and trust The fire will wane and turn to dust. The bow of life's eternal form is bent, and I must know this,....know and trust, It is meant to be, with no relent. The bow of life's eternal form is bent. There is a brave conspiracy. It is meant to be, with no relent. There is a sense of one's own mortality. __________________________________________________________________ by Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/24/2010 4:48:00 PM
Nice and unique way of writing a Pantoum. I love the intelligence in having the second phrase of a longer sentence being the first phrase in a long sentence in the next verse. My Pantoums are more stand alone sentences with suble connection. This, I think is much more creative. Nicely done, Joe
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:56:00 PM
Amazing lines, Carrie. What we all know and must accept. Sure to be a top winner. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/23/2010 5:55:00 PM
Wonderful write Carrie and good luck in the contest by Paula.. a very nice Pantoum and theme luv.. enjoy a Happy Thanksgiving too..
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Date: 11/23/2010 5:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading... well written pantoum.
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