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A Single Red Rose

Dreaming of Him..... Lulled into peaceful dreams Lightly wafting loves sweet schemes As a feather flits upon silken breeze Passion's flight, he owns the keys The Kiss........ Lips melded in desire lighting hearts and souls on fire fully ripe, and velvet to touch receives the love she wants so much Love Gives He wants to take her there with passions strong and love so fair Abandoned now to his embraces Satiated secret places Love Awakens Before the dawn of first sunlight Fearing so, her lover's flight Upon her pillow.. one special red rose To remind her of the love she knows By Cheryl Koomoa © 2009 Cheryl Koomoa (All rights reserved)

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/5/2016 6:48:00 PM

Nicely done a sensual poem great rhyme and rhythm. Congrats on being featured and welcome to PS.

Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 6/7/2016 7:12:00 AM

Thank you very much! I'm honored to have your comments. Aloha, Cheryl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2016 4:05:00 AM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Cheryl. I enjoyed your first poem very much. It was sensual with class! I look forward to reading more. #7. ; )

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2016 12:02:00 PM

Cheryl, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 5/30/2016 12:53:00 PM

Thank you! In time , I'll share a little about me. I look forward to reading more of yours as well. Aloha!

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/30/2016 7:18:00 AM

Classically beautiful! Real poetry!

Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 5/30/2016 8:42:00 AM

I appreciate your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Moon Flower

Date: 5/30/2016 7:07:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Cheryl. :)

Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 5/30/2016 8:43:00 AM

Thanks so much!:) ALOHA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2016 6:19:00 AM

Cheryl,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 5/30/2016 8:53:00 AM

Well,Linda I'm honored to receive your welcome and advice/ orientation. I like to read and. Comment on others as well. Reading poems is a delight as much as writing a poem. I've posted here years ago and forgotten this site until I googled my poems under my previous name Koko Koomoa. I didn't get any comments ever back then. I had to begin a new account. Can't remember my email then or password. I look forward to reading your Poetry too. ALOHA, Cheryl or Koko

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2016 6:18:00 AM

Romantic and nice....Linda

Cheryl Koko Koomoa
Date: 5/30/2016 8:54:00 AM

Thank you!