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A Single Heartbeat

A lonely heartbeat, Hidden beneath the deep. Each with a different rhythm, magnificent to hear them. Bump, bump, bump, bump, Never missing a bump. A lone heartbeat Skipping with each kissing treat, The mind seems to take a backseat, The harmony oh, so sweet A single heartbeat, Bringing life to greet, Finally life has come to a complete.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/1/2014 12:27:00 AM
last line - as should be 'has' instead. Great poem...it should be made into a song...love it...despite the spelling errors. Have a nice day! :)
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/5/2014 9:58:00 AM
Yes Ive changed those spelling errors lolz thx for stopping by:)-Love Ettie
Date: 7/25/2014 6:58:00 PM
A great heartbeat, full of life and experience, making a great song. well done
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/30/2014 10:48:00 AM
Thank you!:) I'm so glad that you liked it-Love Ettie
Date: 7/25/2014 11:20:00 AM
seems like your kissing treat,raced your heart beat lol,nice write Ettie
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/30/2014 10:47:00 AM
Lolz Thx Richard for stopping by:)

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