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A Simple Whim- POTD

How I wish to scuttle alone, over a gentle river, from bank to bank, in a small boat, rowed with a bamboo pole. The call of the wild is an irresistible call, to venture into the silken waters, to feel the wind and look at the blue sky with nimbus clouds drawing strange patterns, when seagulls’ fly, shrieking over my head, and sense the misty spray of water when weary hours shall sink to blend with the soothing sibilance of the river, winding its way through woods and plains!
October. 23.2022 ~Placed Eighth~ POEM OF THE DAY A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/27/2022 2:01:00 PM
Lovely piece Valsa, with good imagery and insightfulness too. Congratulations on the POTD, well done! Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 10/26/2022 8:13:00 PM
This is so lovely! The adventure of it all! Congratulations on POTD, Valsa!
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Date: 10/26/2022 12:37:00 AM
Belated congratulations Valsa, well deserved too. Tom
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Date: 10/25/2022 12:11:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win, in Brian's contest. Many blessings friend
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:35:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... letting me enjoy your shared simple whim. God bless you.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:32:00 PM
Lovely POTD, Miss Valsa. :o)
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:11:00 PM
So glad that this poem of mine is chosen as POTD. Thanks dear friends for all your Congratulations and encouragement. I have been away traveling to a close relative who is lying sick at the terminal stage. So couldn't respond to your comments, but shall do in time.
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Date: 10/24/2022 7:33:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Valsa, congratulations on POTD
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:43:00 PM
"To feel the wind and look at the blue sky." I want to be in that moment right now, and with your words, I can be. This is beautiful, soft and serene. My heart is smiling, Valsa. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/24/2022 2:58:00 PM
On a riverboat, listening to the muted swishing as we paddle along. Congratulations on POTD, Valsa! Wonderful choice.
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Date: 10/24/2022 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Valsa. That soothing sibilance does it for me! Elizabeth
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Date: 10/24/2022 1:03:00 PM
Dear Valsa, a belated congrats to your POTD. Charming.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:19:00 AM
This is very nice, Valsa, but I must admit I prefer to do my "boat scuttling" in my easy chair across from the TV tuned to the Travel Channel. A good choice for POTD, though.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:16:00 AM
I hope I'll wind up there on a raft in my dreams tonight. Congratulations on your POTD. Flowing and masterfully crafted, Valsa!
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:10:00 AM
What a beauty my dear friend Valsa - you explain and describe this gem with such warmth and longing. Congratulations on POTD - so deserved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/24/2022 10:57:00 AM
Back with heartfelt Congratulations on your POTD. This poem is one of my Fave already. Enjoy this honor dear Valsa.
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Date: 10/24/2022 9:06:00 AM
Wow! How much I love your serene poem with soothing descriptive images! This is what I wish too! Congratulations on your POTD and fabulous win. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 10/24/2022 9:03:00 AM
WoW! Valsa, You created such a stunning scene with your skillful hand. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day-Alexis
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Date: 10/24/2022 9:01:00 AM
Wow! So graciously done! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:20:00 AM
SIGN ME UP. BEAUTIFULLY DONE VALSA
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Date: 10/24/2022 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Valsa!
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Date: 10/24/2022 7:35:00 AM
Congrats on that POTD I see you got. You did a great writing of description. Hope it wins with Brian too.
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Date: 10/24/2022 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, Valsa. Seems like a serene rendezvous with nature. A nice pleasant day of peacefulness. I liked the flow and the sprinkling of alliteration. Another FAV for me! Enjoy your special day, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 10/24/2022 7:05:00 AM
Huzzah!! Poetry Soup joins you, hearkening to 'the call of the wild!' Congratulations, Valsa!! on POTD. Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:46:00 AM
You paint a serene picture, Valsa, congrats on POTD. John
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