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A Simple Rose

Buried beneath a concrete rock A simple rose I am The mud sunk my beauty And time revolved passed my sphere. The strongest stroke of the rain Concealed my glare and behind my back left scratches, Trace, and marks of each season. In between of a split of a rock Sweet hands found me and with immense kindness restore my form. I shone like the skyline Like a lantern my light glow and in between the magnificent luminary This fragile rose shone. Artistic hands of divine creation, that transform the abstract and gives it worth and awake the glimpse of the simple admirer to contemplate a splendid and delicate rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/3/2011 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Loyda. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:01:00 PM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading today. Love Scarlett
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:28:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Loyda. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:13:00 AM
A rose beautiful by nature simply us to give it grace to understand its splendor your words... i will chase
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