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A Silvery Day

You came down the aisle and took my hand, We exchanged rings with a vow, so now here we stand. The first few years we spent our time, You sharing my reasons; Me learning your rhymes. The children came...binding us closer together, Our family's boat has sailed in all kinds of weather. We felt the bumps, the heat, the joys, the toil, It was all worth it, as we now look back and smile. Our children grew and we watched them with pride, As only parents can know...from down deep inside. As we see them start down life's path on their own, We remember the work in getting them grown. Silver marks this day at last, Has it really been so many years past? In looking back on our love we can say, We wouldn't have wanted it, any other way. For forever young will our hearts be now, As on that day, when we promised love's vow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 2:00:00 PM
Sorry already comment maade a comment. it is the silver and the couplets that have me going. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2010 2:05:00 PM
what a keeper the vowes, sounds like a nice run,..pd.
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:50:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Daniel. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:54:00 PM
beautiful poem, enjoyed!!
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:54:00 PM
Yeah, I agree with Carolyn, write this with some fancy calligraphy and frame it. That would be a wonderful gift.
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:52:00 PM
Just perfect. Romantic, and a great inspiration. Loved it.
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:49:00 PM
Great write for the one that you love....I know that she will apreciate it..Keep the creative pen flowing....Sara
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your 25th Anniversary, Daniel. Wishing you many more years of happiness. You should frame this poem and give it to your wife! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:36:00 PM
that was absolutely beautiful
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