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A Silly Old Love Song

A silly old love song From a few years ago Touched every fibre Of my inner soul It described with passion How I felt at the time Things couldn't be better Everything was in rhyme But time isn't constant Things start to change Roles get reversed And our life rearranged The flame starts to flicker Then darkness inside Again we start searching For that magical ride Uncertainty reigns Our confidence shattered Things once important No longer mattered Until that new day When we feel it once more That touching of hearts Spirits that soar A silly old love song From a few years ago Once more touches My innermost soul © Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 12/7/2022 2:22:00 PM
The warmth at the end of this piece is so touching. Beautiful one, crafted so cleverly. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/28/2012 4:11:00 PM
cool beans xoxo pd
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/29/2012 5:20:00 AM
LOL A great smackeroo Linda heading your way! Hugs, Jack xox
Date: 12/28/2012 10:23:00 AM
Ah... A little of the old romance... works every time... Memories and reminesces... They bring back great feelings every time.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/29/2012 5:19:00 AM
As I get older, seems I do a lot more reminiscing! Love looking back and recalling all the good times! xox
Date: 12/28/2012 6:59:00 AM
Yeyy, it is a burning flame again. How awesome. Keep it burning, Jack. Fan it. I have a vision of you standing there fanning it with your hands, lol. You don't want it to die down. Enjoyed :) Have a lovely day!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/28/2012 10:06:00 AM
Love makes the world go round! What a sad place it would be without it eh! Hugs, Jack xox

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