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"A Silent Song" Mirror Mirror on the Wall Blessed or cursed Morning shave Coffee please Write a verse Remembers last night’s dream Grabs a napkin, spills his spleen Shoves it in his pocket Walks to work Sits at his desk Carries on as usual Chats on with the new study, he’s on a roll, softly flirts Quietly, silently, it always works Groundhog Day that’s the worst, Where’s the breaker to dive under it all Every now and then a Tempest is called for A heavenly thunderous squall Just to shake it up Move through the strung out long day pall Cover his mirror with her fog and all All the while He’s talking it up, little work day dramas Meetings minute cutlass pen thrust Business as usual, balls to bust Still underneath it all he’s thinking the stories frame by frame She whispers out of nowhere ethereal in his brain, “The best story is yet to arrive, it’s only the middle of the day… maybe some gold glitter, a Llama and a Toucan that sashays?” Empath on his knees by midnight He’s writing melancholic love songs The words are tight, verses short Not long, he’s thinking Turtle Doves and short skirts That won’t work… scrawls it out, writing’s gone with the wind, The best words for the story don’t take too long He listens to some music, thinks of her and sings a new song. Mirror Mirror on the Wall Dreams flourish dripping words black on white her familiar screen pounding faster like raging horses hooves and heart beats bleed vibrant colors mystic legions of wars and lovers a foreign sovereignty her mind and wily covers her pageantry Her eyes the windows of her world Wings beating flying free Cages broken, horses hooves hearts racing She follows him on another shore a dream by sea Praying prophecies Empath on her knees Two very different minds Free to be (Lovejoy-Burton/Feb 2018) Music/ Paolo Conte, "Sparring Partner" https://youtu.be/tzjdY5rmpCA

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Date: 3/29/2018 12:05:00 AM
Fantastic poem. An epic and beautifully written verse here. Thanks for posting!^_^~JWE
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 11/27/2020 12:43:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/9/2018 1:54:00 PM
This thought-provoking poem elicited the emotional logic inversion effect on my mind, Leanne. Very surreal feeling. A doppelganger exiting at a different angle, as seen from the third eye. Very surreal poem expertly penned. Ty for the mental exercise. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:21:00 PM
Hi Leanne, just checking to see if you can see comments now and BTW what a great poem !
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/3/2018 7:50:00 PM
Yes I can. I blocked myself, what a hoot. Thank you for your lovely comment. I am sorry I haven't been into your stories for a while Broken Wings...I must catch up with what beauties you've been creating. x Will comment shortly.
Date: 3/2/2018 5:31:00 PM
I found this to be very true to my own existence. I know somewhere there is a miss to this match only i know not where she be. Leanne you have wrote another one to make me think.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/3/2018 7:52:00 PM
You got to be in it to win it...never give up on the search. x
Date: 3/2/2018 1:52:00 AM
Of course, some stories bloom in silence. Destiny is never loud.
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:43:00 AM
I strangely relate to this. My wife who I imagined and fantisised about came into focus on a trip to mexico. I was from Ontario her from Vancouver ( originally from Hong Kong). I fell in love instantly and moved across the country to be with her. 25 years later I am more in love.i looked into the mirror many times wondering when I would meet her.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/1/2018 12:20:00 PM
Now there's a true story of Love worth reading. Proof that staying true to yourself and never giving up on what you truly desire will eventually find it's way. Call it the Law of the Universe...Call it Destiny, or fate. Call it True Romance. Thank you for sharing your special, beautiful story Richard. A compliment, unique and true.
Date: 2/28/2018 7:54:00 PM
This, is an amazing poem. I saw an entire relationship here. Wow. Congratulations. Bob
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/28/2018 8:37:00 PM
Interesting...I wonder where he is, if he exists at all? He exists in my dreams anyway. Sometimes dreams come true for some. Never Never Ever Give Up the search. Thank you.
Date: 2/28/2018 6:30:00 PM
ying and yang,night and day, earth and sky, open and closed poet...
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/28/2018 8:35:00 PM
teehee...oookay. Thanks Frederic. I'll take that and raise my hat to you.
Date: 2/28/2018 8:53:00 AM
When I reached this line: "Maybe some gold glitter, a llama and a toucan that sashays?" I laughed aloud. This was a great read.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/28/2018 4:23:00 PM
Caren, this is the folly of 'writer's block'...I laughed out loud too. It's not my best poem, that's yet to come. Thank you.
Date: 2/28/2018 8:23:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this... you have lots of talent!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/28/2018 4:32:00 PM
It comes and goes Edward. I don't know about talent, I just love to write. Call it therapy. I shall read your stories now. Thank you for the kind compliment.
Date: 2/28/2018 7:20:00 AM
This is really deep, how both are searching for the same thing but in two different places... Excellent poem Leanne..
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/28/2018 4:36:00 PM
I wrote it on the run and believe it or not I had scribbled thoughts down on a napkin. I like the theme of two different people in different places thinking alike, but with different takes on life and the layers of what life in a dream sense could be in what they are seeking. Sometimes dreams can take you places. Hopefully mine to Skipsea...
Date: 2/28/2018 4:01:00 AM
You put your ideas together very well...from beginning to end...lovely photos too
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/28/2018 4:57:00 PM
Hi Arturo. I have to say sometimes the photos, the art, the stories (from documentaries I watch, to news articles I read, to conversations I have, to history of all types....) - will spark another story in my mind. Sometimes I wonder where all this poetry is leading. I never used to write poetry. I was more a short story writer, but I have to say, I thoroughly enjoy it and I am meeting some very interesting minds in these pages and making some strong friendships. Off to read your latest.

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