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A Silent Rose

leave me in my solitude to enjoy the silence let myself float on a peaceful river I lend my petal’s ear to the wave and enjoy it’s lullaby a moment my longing begins to languish the sidelong glances of beetles and butterflies in my park’s hustle I hope to pick up early dawn greet the dew and feel their coolness glance at sea breeze impassioned in longing bring me back to my garden where I belong to and sit there as a silent rose ~ (c) Sukmawati Komala ~ 08 June 2013

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Date: 6/9/2013 2:35:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Sukmawati! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2013 11:21:00 AM
Sukma, absolutely love your poem. Lovely scene painted with your words ;) *hugs* Wilma
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Date: 6/9/2013 11:04:00 AM
wow, You have painted a nice feeling of wanting to feel nothing but solitude. a lovely rose, and garden that seems the fittest.. lovely and a perfect 10 poem.. Linda
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