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Hidden on a lonely old daunting road Dark and melancholy clandestine Cemetery weary of last tears sowed. Undecipherable daunting shrines Bracing cold marble and granite tombstones Deeply rooted in hard defiant earth matter Some leaned drunkenly upon its groans Others stood in various states of disrepair Cracked or chipped, inscriptions, some eroded smooth mats of moss and ivy clasp to its bosoms. Forgotten as they start to fade, embraced in wild vegetation, pits and mounds of decaying falling trees, and lace lichen. Uncertain of how many vessels interred there haunting the graveyard that time has soothed. Sad voices from the past echo overwhelming weeping emotions expressed sorrow and grief that won’t let go. Lived a life, but some died as an unknown in its stillness surrounded not wanting to be alone watching the world grow old. I step into this unforgotten cemetery, embracing a bouquet of yellow roses in my arms looking for a departed loved one. To no avail I laid a single rose and said a silent prayer with tears of wonder and sadness and grieve for all these forgotten souls.
10/6/2016 Poetry Contest: Pick A Title - Free Verse- 4. A Silent Prayer Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/11/2019 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful, captivating poem Eve, congratulations on your win! xomo <3
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Date: 3/9/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Eve!:-) You definitely floored me with this outstanding poem! Congratulations on your second place win!
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:42:00 PM
Beautiful, Eve. I love old cemeteries, and you describe it so well. Congratulations on your win. Agnes
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Date: 10/9/2016 5:32:00 PM
Old tombstones do make you think. They seem like the persons life is forgotten with them and you caught that. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:48:00 PM
Eve, so beautifully penned, your descriptive words are wondrous, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:20:00 AM
A beautiful write Eve. I love your word usage.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/9/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much, James :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/9/2016 11:08:00 AM
wow Eve! this is amazing and so worthy of a top win :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Laura, your always make me smile with your wonderful inspiring words :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/8/2016 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations Eve, well done...
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Charlie :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/8/2016 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work!! Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/9/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sara, :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/8/2016 2:42:00 PM
Hi Eve, You penned a sad moving write. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/8/2016 2:53:00 PM
thank you Alexis Hugs Eve
Date: 10/7/2016 8:44:00 AM
This is excellent story telling Mrs Eve. The imagery is wonderful. I know Constance will love this one. Best wishes for contest!
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Date: 10/7/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, your inspirational words are always welcome :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/6/2016 9:53:00 PM
I forgot to say, a Fav!!!!
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Date: 10/6/2016 9:50:00 PM
You know I love this style of poem! You have weaved a sad and melancholy story, so beautiful!
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Date: 10/6/2016 10:24:00 PM
thank you so much, Arhur.... Hugs Eve

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