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A Ship Has Sailed

a ship has sailed tears flowing a labored breath upon my cheek off in the distance dark shadows looming out to sea her image fading a ship has sailed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 9:18:00 AM
I really like this Marie, it is such a sad piece but then I suppose life has a lot of saddness. You create the picture very well in 9 lines. Would have meaning for a lot of people. Regards: Déirdre
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Date: 3/29/2009 9:00:00 AM
I love the image of the fading ship moving beyond the horizon, Marie. It is compelling, too, as it leave us to wonder why the writer mourns. Well done!
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