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A Shift In Paradigm

The beast thought about it There is a certain pride that prices the unChrist thought Status to control the mind Must dazzle largely on the eyes A manger has some cinderella gleam to it But nothing today slithers from the myth Because the world has lost belief Because reality is a cinder From a burning sheaf The beast ceased to ponder and plodded away Across the hills of Pakistan's grandeur In the valleys of Afghanistan's splendour The beast bleeding bed to die. In this culture nothing Can be born again ... the beast has tasted acid rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/28/2009 12:03:00 AM
The beast...oh that last line was....@.@ it owns!!! epic, mystic, contemporary, so many things in a single line @.@ thanks for the experience!!!
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:38:00 AM
My great brother! As you have came upon my humble writtings I wish to thank you with much gratitude. I humble to you sire with much talent. For the Lord is love and all is love. I pray, and I believe in this very hour he sent you to uplift me! Glory to His name! I was feeling very low yet with faith in heart. But by your kind comments of living believe I stand not alone anymore but by your soft words of uplifting I stand to my feet and praise with all my heart! Merci! Thank you great broter.
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Date: 5/25/2009 9:12:00 AM
I play with space and time. Turn letters around to rhyme. A beast indeed as stolen belief, but the best of us can see... there is only peace, in the coming reality. Blessings my friend! Always, you are a brilliant write.Light.
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Date: 5/20/2009 3:25:00 PM
you are a woman with many views and aspects what wondorous things that you expell from such a beautiful place thank you for your work it distracts my mind
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Date: 5/12/2009 1:34:00 PM
L'nass,...Oh lord,...you write so well, and I am in aw of your fantastical compositions,...great work,..and don't mind please if I post a poem that I wrote when I was 30,...it has some what of your chime,..God bless you and your words! james
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Date: 5/10/2009 8:48:00 AM
THE WORLD HAS LOST BELIEVE--sad isnt it?the beast has tasted acid rain,may he taste how nice it is to love all humankind,if there s still hope for the beast--bravo---charma
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:36:00 AM
Storming poem L'nass, you write extremely well, James
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:38:00 PM
L'nass a very powerful poem - Pardon me I just woke up went over to Durham, Ca one of my friends finished hooking up my 800 watt Pioneer System in my jeep and then they had a parade and festival at the park and we went swimming at the steel bridge - I came home and went out like a light - I have to agree with the ending of this poem - Great write - God Bless, MJ
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