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A Shadow Walks Beside Me

A shadow walks beside me in the sun— faithful companion, mimicking my every move. Through the decades of my life, I scarcely noticed little changes in his form. He seems just a bit shorter now and stooped slightly at the waist—moving slower than before. Now I find he is also not so near and one hand mimicks the shake of my own hand. Where does that come from? Hardly see him anymore, as I sit here in my room. But friends and dear ones gather round. I seldom feel alone. I tug now at my shadow, for he shuffles more than walks, as I spend more time outside, walking in the sun, finding purpose in my days. Still my shadow struggles but works hard as any friend— never giving up. Someday, I suppose, I'll finally get a new one.

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Date: 4/19/2020 11:22:00 AM
Masterfully done and very intriguing the concept. Our lifelong friend the shadow knows, it tags along for the free ride and tells us that we belong. So immensely cerebral and true vision from a poet's heart and truth. A fav, God bless..
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Date: 2/15/2020 2:13:00 PM
Shadows are the most reliable friends anyone can have, they're always right there with us and can never really leave us alone completely... This is yet another great write from you Mark. Keep up the wonderful work my friend!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/7/2020 8:31:00 PM
I treasure your comments, Kelly. Haven't posted much lately, but I know, whenever I do, you are there with needed support. Thank you so very much.
Date: 1/29/2020 4:15:00 PM
Someday I hope you see only the shadow that comes from your halo, Mark. Love the way you describe the shadow having a hard time keeping up with him and also the way it changes as his body ages. Excellent writing! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2020 12:18:00 AM
Yep, just me and my shadow and an end date to both: the date uncertain. Will there be shadows in the ethereal realm? Or none at all since all around is light, and we will be immersed in it.
Date: 1/29/2020 3:41:00 PM
I love this, mark and line put a good word for it: Poignant!! very well done, my friend and thanks for the visit you paid me and my poems the other day.
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Date: 1/30/2020 12:20:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. My shadow is a constant companion, but only on sunny days. I wonder where he hides when the sun is not out.
Date: 1/15/2020 2:45:00 PM
We can all relate. I love the evolution in your poem. Subtle, poignant and uplifting. A FAVE for me.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 1/21/2020 8:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line. Each comment I receive is treasured and yours, particularly.

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