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A September Morning

Bundled up against the chill morning air I sit on my deck soaking up the sun. The deer below nibble leaves without care. My presence here no longer makes them run, they will tolerate me 'til they are done. The September sky is so bright and blue. Beautiful days like this will soon be few. We must enjoy them while they are still here for much too soon this summer will be through and I'll have no more mornings with the deer. ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ Francine Roberts 06/09/2011 dizain- ababb ccdcd - 10 syllables per line for Dr. Ram Mehta's "Dizain " contest

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Date: 9/8/2011 10:44:00 AM
How lucky you are!!! We too, have an occasional deer ...but our dog makes such a fuss, that they soon run off. What is more peaceful or lovely to watch, however, than the deer grazing!? Enjoy your visit with them!
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Date: 9/7/2011 5:23:00 PM
Francine: Good luck with your entry in the “Dizain” poetry contest as Dr. Ram Mehta judges. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 7:49:00 PM
Such a nice feeling which resonates from each line.............yum!!!EXCELLENT imagery!
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:08:00 PM
Lovely poem here Francine.Best wishes.
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:43:00 AM
Enjoyed your nature write Francine, gives me the awareness also of fleeting moments, so enjoyed..
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