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a second heartbeat

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a second heartbeat

dazzling the eyes
like a star
lighting up
begins an unsung melody
flowing most beautiful
of rivers
tricking within
a soul

digging deep
i found
a golden treasure
wrapped most precious
of gems
touched the deepest

whispering softly
plays upon cords
drifting upon air
the sweetest 
of music
playing a violin
crying every breath
echoes in wind

stoking a fire
burning hot
blazing inferno
sparking desires
you darling
my second 

Copyright © liam mcdaid

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Beautifully done Liam.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 3:14:00 PM
    That's a beautiful way to describe someone dear to you as your second heartbeat Liam..

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 2:11:00 PM
    this is a wonderful poem liam... I like the second heartbeat sound... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:22:00 PM
    :-D Lovely......fabulous