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A Second Beer

I had a second beer, oh dear, But now I’ve made it home. Yet what is very clear, I fear, Is I can’t write a poem. My brain is not in gear, so here Is all that I’ve composed. Whatever does appear, I fear’s Ineptitude exposed.

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Robert Johnson

Date: 7/28/2015 4:46:00 PM

Just go with the flow and soon you'll know. That that's the only way to go. But have a third and you'll probably sound like a loony bird. :) I'm not advocating drinking, I just happen to be on my second beer. :) Have a nice evening ilene. :) Here's to ya. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2015 4:58:00 AM

LOL - I never drink beer only tea - so 2 cups have no affect on my writing ability or inability lol:-) hugs Jan xx