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A Seasons Dance

Warm days herald in the spring as she dances among young flowers the mating call strong adds its ring soon nestlings, calves and beavers grow strong as she swirls past dancing Hot flush of summer vibrant flowers greet summer as she flashes past in haste in case her time she flitters falling in love a dance spell is cast Autumn slowly following does a dance most stately performs she prances and flaunts on tiptoes her stage is the forest platform Winter grim and bleak in marches her dance sometime very sullen with her icy fingers she clutches when she lets go you are heartbroken On very rare occasions they come together and dance around in joy of sisters united oh what a time they have as they caper forgetting the many times they have feuded written 09/28/2013 by Shadow Hamilton contest A Season's Dance

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Date: 10/23/2013 1:19:00 PM
lovely win Shadow,.. LOVE --SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:18:00 PM
ty Skat hope all is well Shadow x smile
Date: 10/22/2013 10:07:00 PM
Hello Shadow, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:19:00 PM
hi Linda it was fun ty Shadow x smile
Date: 10/22/2013 9:58:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Shadow...nicely done.....hugs
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:20:00 PM
Ty Joseph for kind remarks Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/21/2013 12:46:00 PM
Lovely, Shadow! Congrats on your winning placement! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/23/2013 5:21:00 PM
hi Rhonda I love writing about nature Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 11:57:00 AM
Like the twist of feuding seasons. Nicely done. Congrats n your win :)
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:52:00 PM
hi Karen and Ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful and lovely piece,Shadow...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...Kudos to you,pal...
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:53:00 PM
hi OA and Ty for reading and nice review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 8:46:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:53:00 PM
Ty Sara your review is so inspiring Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 5:07:00 AM
Beautifully done my dearest Shadow.
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:15:00 AM
so nice to see you here dearest M.M hope you have a great holiday ty for enjoying this Shadow xox smile hugs
Date: 10/19/2013 10:08:00 PM
Very clever meshing of the seasons. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:16:00 AM
hi Joyce and Ty for reading and congrats Shadow x smile
Date: 10/19/2013 4:50:00 PM
the season's dance beautifully across the page through your words...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/19/2013 8:39:00 PM
Hi Sandra a fun subject to write about Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 10/7/2013 11:29:00 AM
very creative poem friend Shadow..Good luck in the contest. cheers! :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:17:00 PM
very colorful! I especially liked the spring's dance!! and I know what you mean about the rare occasions they all dance together. It can happen, especially in Utah!!
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:07:00 PM
I really like your ending..Great work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have put "A Season's Dance" to sleep if you care to read the finished work..Sara
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Date: 9/29/2013 3:30:00 PM
just read it Sara its beautiful Ty it just seemed right to unite them lol glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/28/2013 12:11:00 PM
wonderful write Shadow...I enjoyed the read...
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:12:00 PM
Ty Joseph nice of you Shadow x smile
Date: 9/28/2013 8:36:00 AM
I like always the personification as far as nature is concerned, enjoyed it, Shadow
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:13:00 PM
Ty Dr Ram glad you liked it Shadow x smile

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