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A Sea of Boyhood Dreams

An expansive view of tumbling sand and lasting memories make seagulls swoop in broad paintbrush strokes over brothers bonded by baseball and a broken home. Within a sandcastle, two boys taste salt on their tongues, a savory blend of pinky promises, dolphin sightings and an acute ache for adventure. Innocence crashes between truths untold and manhood. Whether a plethora of clouds settle in their sight or brown eyes squint in midday sunlight, their bare feet roam through foamy waters. Down the beach, over conch shells and starfish, freedom thrills. With curiosity and cartwheels, spry minds and lanky limbs, youth salvages its adventurous spirit. Four hands assemble a paper sailboat, not seaworthy, of course, but fine for fistfuls of fantasy with a deck wide enough to hold their dreams. Sandcastles and sailboats, cartwheels crashing in waves, daydreams falling asleep under charmed stars, wide eyes seeking sand crabs - these moments salvage each boy’s adventurous spirit in swept paintbrush strokes and shadows of silver-lined clouds in the sand. We categorize innocence, oceans, promises, adventure, dreams of boys and paper sailboats. We try to soak up an expansive sea. I hung a painting on my wall and tried to unalphabetize it all. Life is messy and beautiful. Without the taste of salt on my tongue, I could only live vicariously through the art.
Rhonda J Saunders, written 11/15/15 for Eve's Oil Painting's 1-2-3 Contest Inspired by painting #1

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Date: 11/19/2015 11:45:00 AM
Beautiful, captivating imagery as usual, Rhonda. Congrats on your win. hugs!
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:59:00 PM
Your interpretation is delightful and creative, Rhonda; the imagery captivates. Congrats on a lovely podium finish! // paul
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:07:00 AM
One of my personal favorites so far, congrats.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:54:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, Rhonda, congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:19:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:30:00 AM
Rhonda, nice to see you writing again, always you don't fail me to amaze me with your lines... Excellent! ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, dear Olive, for the visit and kind words. It feels good to write again...hugs, Rhonda
Date: 11/15/2015 7:31:00 PM
My sons grew up near the sea, you've captured it well..good luck in the contest
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, dear Frederic! I also grew up near the sea. I'm still only less than 10 miles away from the beach, but I don't seem to get there enough. Hugs, Rhonda
Date: 11/15/2015 3:13:00 PM
I enjoyed this piece of poetry Rhonda, Great images and really captures the scene!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Kevin! :)) Hugs, Rhonda
Date: 11/15/2015 2:49:00 PM
absolutely delightful imagery Rhonda - I first saw this image a few months ago and am totally in awe of Eve's creativity with the brush and pen. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I love Eve's paintings. She's very talented...hugs, Rhonda

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