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A Saviour Is What We Need

why? why won't you save another, why don't you save someone, you would like to be saved when you are in need you think you deserve it more? oh wait, maybe it is they who don't deserve any. maybe you are right, I guess not. they are nobodies. and you are too. we all are nobodies nobody will save nobody. all we have is to wait, is to wait for the return, of our Saviour! that will save us all! save us all from ourselves and sins that's eating us up day by day even our bones and souls you wouldn't save you if you had the chance to so why save them or me?

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Date: 3/6/2018 12:57:00 PM
Hi Anna I really like this poem about the arrival of a saviour in the end of times, I do believe the that Jesus Christ(Peace be upon him) who was lifted to Heavens by God will return in the end of Times as a Saviour.
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Date: 11/30/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thankfully Jesus didn’t save Himself. If He had we would all be doomed. It is hard to understand how God can Love us when at times we have such hatred for ourselves. Thankfully God does not view us with earthly eyes.
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:40:00 AM
yes, that is very true. I agree and just feel blessed knowing how great God loves us even though at times we don't love Him back but in spite of that He loves us
Date: 11/30/2017 8:18:00 AM
A really beautiful written poem, you re not the only person who s waiting for the Saviour of the world, I myself is anxiously waiting for the second coming of Jesus Christ and want to experience his company, he ll come just wait and have patience as he said that the son of man will come like thiefs in the night, so it s not clear when but it will be unexpected and really powerful, as he also said as lighting jot in east and here in west so shall be the coming of son of man, good luck
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Date: 11/30/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing these 2 beautiful verses. yes like you I myself want to experience his coming back. thank you and good luck too :) xx
Date: 11/29/2017 1:35:00 PM
Who will be the saviour that is the question.. Well written..
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Date: 11/30/2017 3:21:00 AM
thank you for reading and liking :)
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Date: 11/30/2017 3:09:00 AM
i wouldn't like to talk about religion directly much... but as a Christian, i believe Christ is our saviour

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