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A Saturday Reflection

I hear the chirruping of birds. It emerges from vast hidden spaces from wherever the birds may be. Their twittering sounds are scattered, interspersed with cricket sounds and the intermittent whimpers of a lonely pup that seems to be a distance not too far away. The birds refuse to show themselves. They are like the happy people of my neighborhood busy with their lives. . . . The birds and my neighbors elude me. The crickets keep to their camouflage in the grass. The little dog's sad cries have now disappeared. On this ordinary warm June afternoon I begin to wonder where Robin Redbreast went. It seems like it was yesterday - a brighter day - I saw her in my very own front yard. If she's singing now, I wouldn't know. I do not know the song of a sparrow from a lark's. I'd rather “feel” joy, not just hear it. And I'd rather see with my own eyes those crickets at their play (I'm just that way). I'd like to have that little dog with me. I'd pat his head and stroke his coat and say, "Robin Redbreast hides from us today. She may have gone away, but I am here, sweet dog. I understand. I understand." For the the 'ALL YOURS (Apr 20)' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

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Date: 9/7/2015 1:49:00 PM
'I'd rather “feel” joy, not just hear it.' Yep, that's 'Dandy Andy' in a nutshell...Happy birthday AND congrats - Tim
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Date: 9/6/2015 5:57:00 AM
I like how this is tied together, not to mention it includes a dog. Congrats.
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Date: 9/5/2015 9:19:00 PM
Very tender! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Hugs, Balveen
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Date: 9/5/2015 12:22:00 PM
happy Birthday Andrea,, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2015 10:12:00 AM
Very wonderful write Andrea! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 9/5/2015 8:42:00 AM
I like casual introspective first person writes. They make you feel like your sharing a little piece of someone's life, like your an old friend sharing a special moment with them.
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:27:00 PM
What a sweet write! It has a homey, nostalgic feel to it that makes me want to be there, experiencing the same things. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this poem,how did it get trashed.WELL DONE
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Date: 9/4/2015 4:49:00 PM
a beautiful lyric Andrea congrats in Broken wings contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:51:00 PM
Andrea, A beautiful poem--Congratulations. I love your style. Barbara
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:32:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Any Poem Trashed Contest, beautifully penned
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:31:00 AM
A great poem of lost emotions, .. ;-) Congratulations-in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:26:00 AM
If ever I held envy for a puppy, it's now.... Beautiful work, sweetheart. This is worth yielding my place to you... I'm rapidly realizing why I love you so..... Jake
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:05:00 AM
So country! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:54:00 PM
A sweet poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win friend Andrea..Have a blessed day always!! :)
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:25:00 AM
There is so much tenderness in this sweet but sad poem. Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:18:00 AM
Congrats my dear. This is an "everyday" poem..Hope you understand what I mean by that. BG
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:22:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea....
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:18:00 AM
This is a powerful poem that needs to be read twice. More to this poem than meets the eye. You've weaved many different emotions in your write. To understand you must read between the lines. I love this poem very much . Congratulation on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:13:00 AM
My congratulations Andrea on your big win in Nathan's contest. Your lyric has made me feel the the tenderness of your heart and although you miss the robin and the pup, you still have those sweet memories to hold on to. I have enjoyed reading it. I wish you a Happy Fourth of July. Thank you for your comment this morning. Peace & Love, Andrew.
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Date: 7/2/2013 1:25:00 AM
there's so much to this poem on so many levels and i love them all. congratulations on a very well-deserved win!
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:40:00 PM
Andrea, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:19:00 PM
thanks for the comment 'congrats ' NATE
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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