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A Sapphire Ring

Looking back at the Earth, I can't really describe how beautiful it is from 300 miles up. Looking down, you can tell it's a planet. The sky is black. There's just a thin blue ribbon, what we see as blue sky on Earth. You realize how small it is and how fragile the planet is...............by Astronaut Mike Good: a thin blue crescent of earth from the moon looks like a jewelled head band crowning a young queen on a dark night when her love slides a sapphire hoop silver stars sparkle above this clear azure line making love life snug May 13, 2016 For Rita A. Simmonds

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Date: 5/18/2016 12:20:00 PM
Dear Balveen: Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Thank you for the reminder! And thank you for participating!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/18/2016 12:41:00 PM
That's exceptionally sweet and kind of you, Rita! Thanks for the placement! Love..
Date: 5/18/2016 7:42:00 AM
Hi Balveen. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Teddy!
Date: 5/16/2016 10:33:00 AM
Beautiful words and imagery,thanks Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/18/2016 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 5/15/2016 9:45:00 PM
Balveen, you have created such lovely Senryus that convey great artistic imagery of our earth as seen from outer space. Congratulations on your nice placement in this Premiere Contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 6:26:00 AM
Delighted with your appreciation, Sandra!
Date: 5/14/2016 5:16:00 PM
beautifully crafted Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/16/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thanks Lenny!
Date: 5/12/2016 8:15:00 PM
OOPS, sorry, I saw the name Rita right above here, and realized that is the name of the person whose contest you wrote for. Sorry, Balveen.
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Date: 5/13/2016 5:52:00 AM
No apologies only smiles, Andrea!
Date: 5/12/2016 8:14:00 PM
this is a very creative response to the challenge of the ribbon of blue, Rita. I like it very much.
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:40:00 PM
What's in a name?! You've found my work creative, so that is it! Thanks Andrea!

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