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A Sapphire Oblivion

It's a beggar's repentance... Two swans dance between the mist and the stars. A sapphire oblivion rages from the moon. ...with a pocket full of apologies.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2015 4:12:00 PM

Rereading this beauty..and Im.sure she would accept such an apology without the need to beg.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/18/2015 2:48:00 PM

This is so beautiful. Congratulations on having it featured Red. #7

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/16/2015 8:06:00 AM

: )love these original apologies and the dancing swans beak to beak..most probably... Lovely..Welcome to. PS

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2015 5:06:00 PM

I like this very much Red B., WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2015 2:40:00 PM

- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 10/12/2015 11:28:00 AM

WOW, the title and imagery are a perfect match, Red -- Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2015 8:12:00 PM

It's above my head, but I think the imagery is brilliant!! thanks for visiting my poetry today. Hope to see more from you.