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A Salmon's Tale

Two brothers salmon in the deep blue sea Got the urge one day to seek some revelry. So off they both went into the early dawn With naught on their minds but to swim and spawn. Up the big river with its mouth so wide, It must be a mile from side to side. For days and days those two fish swam ‘Til they ran smack-dab into a concrete dam! Round and round that great grey wall They swam, but found no help at all. Relief came, not from heaven sent, But sure enough from the government! A big fish ladder with its lifts and falls Helped those boys to skirt that wall Into a lake with its shores so green The two fish entered on another scene! As if decreed by constabulary The lake was fed by five tributaries! “Which one to take?”, was their question then, The answer came to the first brother Sven. “I know where to go”, you could hear him say, “I’ve been here before! I can find the way!” So off Sven went, and his brother, Pete, too; Guided by nothing but Deja Vu! The stream they chose was swift and clean But the rocks therein were hard and mean! Bruised and battered Ol’ Pete said, “ENOUGH!” “This swim-and-spawn life is just too rough!” “Swimming all day against the stream?” “This might be for you Sven, but it ain’t my dream!” So he turned with the current and went with the flow, Against his true nature, to the blue sea below. He passed other salmon, in their eyes was a gleam, All turning red as they struggled upstream. Pete was red too from his tail to his face. When he reached the blue sea, he seemed out of place. The swimming was easy, with no current to fight, But Pete couldn’t know of his fate nor his plight. A flashy red Pete in the bright blue dawn A sea lion spied him and SNAP! Pete was gone! In the mean time, Sven kept on swimming for days; His back out of water in the warm summer rays. He made his way to a cool sandy brook And spied a coy babe-fish with a cute little look. And there on the edge of a loose gravel shoal, They frolicked and played and fulfilled their role: They had both done their best; standing out in a crowd. Sven also died, but his maker is proud! This tale has a moral, as all good tales do. A metaphor of life, it is tried and true: “Swimming through life is no simple feat, Endure to the end, or end up like Pete!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/28/2017 11:38:00 AM
Wow!...what a documentary Dean...should be a movie, without any sharks though lol...god bless...^WW^
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 11:54:00 AM
Coming from one of the poets that gave us "The Real McCoy" I am honored! That is a great piece of work. Thanks for taking time to read and comment WW.
Date: 8/27/2017 8:26:00 PM
Wow, what a great story telling poem, you had me "hooked" from beginning to end!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:26:00 AM
hehe! Thank you Arthur.
Date: 8/27/2017 6:00:00 PM
You paint the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of your tale into our conscious minds and we too can swim along side of Sven and Pete for a short time. The message is clear and truly poetically expressed with conviction gleaned from the years of experiences the author now shares with the reader. Well done. Emile.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:26:00 AM
Emile, as always I appreciate your comments and deep insight.
Date: 8/27/2017 9:52:00 AM
What a good story.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks for dropping in Dale.
Date: 8/27/2017 8:23:00 AM
Enjoyed this very much, Dean! A great fish tale!!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 8/27/2017 1:11:00 AM
This is a delightful allegory with a wise message. But there will always be the rebels in this world like Pete! Great rhyme in this creative piece Dean!: )
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:24:00 AM
So true Connie. Some folks just have to go against the grain. Each to his own I suppose. Thanks for reading.
Date: 8/26/2017 7:33:00 PM
It has always intrigued me as to why your Pacific Salmon return once and then die...and yet our Atlantic Salmon can return time and time again -- why is this I wonder? Great bit of writing, Dean - enjoyed! My very best regards. :) john
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:23:00 AM
Oh, you've taught me something today John. I didn't realize the Atlantic salmon had a different script. Interesting!
Date: 8/26/2017 6:17:00 PM
Wow what a story of endurance Dean!! I very much enjoyed it. Although sad about the sea lion and Pete. You were very creative with this!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/28/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I wrote this some time ago for a Sunday School lesson. The kids liked it.

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