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A Sadness Defeater

That first cup of coffee, what could be sweeter It's starts the day right, it's a sadness defeater We wake up all groggy and stumble over things Into walls and doorways, to a table we cling Lucky if we make it to the kitchen in one piece Hopefully we won't get splattered with grease While cooking up bacon and eggs and some taters I'm wondering the cost of a live-in cook and baker Okay back to the brew that revives us once more Without it we're zombies with bumps galore If the girls at the office could see us like this There'd be no more begging for a passionate kiss Pretend not to see me, avoid me like the plague They'd make up excuses no matter how vague So you see the importance of our morning brew It starts the day off with a bright howdy do That first cup of coffee, what could be sweeter It's yummy in the tummy and a sadness defeater

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Date: 3/22/2024 1:24:00 AM
Loving this ode to coffee! Always so clever. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/22/2024 2:01:00 PM
Dear dear Laura... are you about to resign from the Soup??? Sure appears so! We have lost touch with other but I apologise sweet Laura! Love Happy Jack xxx
Date: 3/18/2024 2:33:00 PM
Very nice! I didn’t have my first until 10 today. You’re safe…it’s over. Oh happy day ;)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/19/2024 5:15:00 AM
There's no way I could make it until 10... I would hurt somebody!
Date: 3/18/2024 6:23:00 AM
Dear Jack, YES! another humorous yet relatable picture of the morning struggle and the transformative power of that first cup of coffee. It's delightful how something as simple as a morning ritual can lift our spirits and set the tone for the day ahead. Your playful language and scenes capture the essence of the daily grind with wit and charm. What a lighthearted ode to the joys of caffeine! - Blessings, Daniel
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2024 7:36:00 AM
No matter what lies ahead, we all somehow manage to make it through... the human spirit prevails! Have a cheerful day Daniel!
Date: 3/17/2024 4:53:00 PM
nicely done, dear Jack. I definitely need that jolt of caffeine first thing in the morning...as I've aged, I'm groggier and less stable. Sometimes I wonder if I'm walking in my sleep :-) I enjoyed your entertaining poem. Have a great evening, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2024 5:43:00 PM
(chuckle) oh for that morning jolt eh! Sometimes I walk into walls! Cheers Happy Jack xxx

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