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A Rugged Incident

It was calm Sunday morning everybody lay snoring in the midst of park eyes gave a spark heart started flowing mind started glowing started walking fast forgetting my past first time our eyes met and time for the meeting set the story was going fine we both , enjoying the wine good times lasts so short she gave a thought to meet her friend i agreed so that she doesn't offend again the same place but the time played an ace i saw my past walking so fast towards my table started towards my gable from the other edge came the sledge girlfriend said she's here aghast i said where she turned back i turned back life playing fun everything round like bun my past in front and present behind to confront she said "you?" my girlfriend said "he's my new" laughing out loud gathering the crowd she said "he's my past " i said "am not going to last" my girlfriend turning hot waiter arriving with biryani pot my past already out walking slowly listening her shout my past went, present gone standing with future alone

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Date: 5/17/2015 12:09:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Abhishek :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:40:00 PM
Hi Abhishek, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Abhishek Raghav
Date: 5/17/2015 12:47:00 AM
thanks a lot for this warm welcome :) :) i appreciate it and i wuld love to recieve help frm this community thanks again
Date: 5/16/2015 8:16:00 AM
Abhishek, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Abhishek Raghav
Date: 4/23/2016 1:03:00 PM
hey SKAT A i am back with one of my poems plz do read them and give your comments thank you also for more of my poems visit raghavpoem.blogspot.in
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Abhishek Raghav
Date: 5/17/2015 12:48:00 AM
hello skat thanks for the warm welcome and thank you for the comment i will look forward for more of it :) thnaks again

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