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A Rose-Bud Breeze

I think of you.. An instant swirl of a rose-bud breeze descending between silence and sleep. My one and only night- time companion. At last,we're no longer strangers I know you! I found you! I have you! Fresh manna casacading on a slothful pillow The sweetest contentment released . A flutter of butterflies in sync with my heart's Du-dum,Du-dum,drumming beat . Yet,words,words fail me, Pink lips are sealed. Low voice can't utter soft ardent whispers nor gentle echoes can return back to recall this beauty I see. My pen can't scribble the name of the flame where fire desires to be Each line is too faint, Each verse is too bleak, too bleak to describe you, and the hundred emotions which you make me feel.
Inspired by music

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/5/2023 2:45:00 AM
Dear beautiful talented soul, the way you weave words is so beautiful and creative and touches my soul in a resonating manner so profoundly! I felt it especially as you wrote “ iv found u” i know u i have u” what a most beautiful feeling is that? My pen cant scribble the name of the flame! Awwn! So romantic! Thank u so much for supporting me too
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:58:00 PM
I really like this and the title is so catchy. Good to see this one i had not commented to yet.
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Date: 2/4/2022 9:19:00 PM
Ew wee!
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Date: 8/31/2020 11:02:00 PM
Gentle, kind and wonderful words shared dear Charmaine. You could feel the memory and the desire in the words.
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Date: 8/16/2020 1:33:00 PM
Ahhh!! Enjoyed this one today. Sara
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Date: 4/28/2020 6:41:00 PM
Your words paint a delightful and serene scene. With all the giddiness of a first love. (wonder what type of music inspired this?) ... as a side note: I enjoyed your manna line, however, I couldn't figure out anywhere online what "sloughtful" means?
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/22/2020 6:56:00 PM
Am glad youike it.Thanks for reading.Slothful is lazy...A lazy pillow :)
Date: 3/29/2020 7:05:00 AM
This was a real treat. Wonderfully scribed poem. Thank you for this JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/19/2020 3:04:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Charmaine :) - Take care and stay healthy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/3/2020 3:21:00 PM
Keep listening to your music,,, such lovely words from the heart. Hugs
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Date: 2/12/2020 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful work Miss Malta
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Date: 2/11/2020 4:41:00 AM
This is truly beautiful, Charmaine. So lovely :) Charlie
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/11/2020 1:48:00 PM
Thanks so much Charles.
Date: 2/9/2020 1:05:00 AM
Golly, Charmaine! I am so glad I found this! Your Poetry is a forever-inspiration. Wishing you the best. Panagiota Romios. xx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/11/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kindness.
Date: 2/3/2020 8:38:00 PM
Lovely to see you posting again Charmaine, and what a lovely poem too. I do agree, music brings out the best, and inspires romantic poetry like yours. I love it, a fave for the list....Maria Hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/11/2020 1:46:00 PM
Thanks so much sweet lady.
Date: 2/3/2020 5:09:00 PM
Wow, stunning, Charma! I would hate not being able to express my love. Your poem's a fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/11/2020 1:45:00 PM
Hi Dear friend.Hope all is well on your side of the moon.Thanks for reading..Hugs :)
Date: 2/3/2020 3:14:00 PM
Missed your romantic expressions - beautiful Charma
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/11/2020 1:44:00 PM
Hope you're doing well.Thanks so much Craig.
Date: 2/3/2020 8:07:00 AM
Music can be so inspiring...loved the poem.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/3/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness James :)
Date: 2/2/2020 2:17:00 PM
Your words indeed express what the imagination conjures in lack of your being able to describe what you feel. This is beautiful Charmaine and is going into my Faves! I can relate. xxoo
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/3/2020 9:26:00 AM
Aw..Thanks so much sweet lady.
Date: 2/2/2020 1:12:00 PM
Not being able to express what lies within, to liberate those mixed emotions is sad, Charm...and yet it's compensated by the knowledge that love is there, waiting to be fulfilled. ~ A pleasure to have you posting again, my friend. Best regards // paul
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/3/2020 9:27:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness Paul.
Date: 2/1/2020 7:22:00 AM
Seems like a special one...Lovely poem we should all feel this way about a beloved...Nice to see you posting ..
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2020 9:28:00 AM
Yes we should S.O .Thanks for stopping by :).
Date: 1/31/2020 4:17:00 PM
Music can bring out some wonderful emotions...lovely poem Charma
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2020 9:30:00 AM
Indeed TS.Thanks.
Date: 1/31/2020 4:13:00 PM
an instant swirl of breeze roused the fingers to dance upon the page. beautiful and very well crafted , Charmain. Hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thanks sweet lady
Date: 1/31/2020 3:58:00 PM
Wow, this was beautiful...such a long time in between poems but definitely worth the wait. I loved this one my friend, it feels so soft and alluring. Music is certainly a wonderful inspiration. So nice to see you writing again.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness Chris.
Date: 1/31/2020 3:13:00 PM
Sounds like a great love song Charma. Enjoyed reading this evening;-)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Keith
Date: 1/31/2020 2:53:00 PM
A joy to read your breath taking lines charma:-) hugs Jan xx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/1/2020 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kindness Jan.

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