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A Romance With Electrons

How could hands touch with such tender velocity! Eyes, with bolts of lightning, electric. Yet have the softest, velvet synchronicity? That WestCoast night, hearts bound and eclectic Your arms about my waist, in the windows, fog-glossed reflection. A moment’s, Monet’ sacred masterpiece! That cried out for human creation. Of you, of me, to bring to life, a being in God’s own time and divination. 12/31/2021

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Date: 1/4/2022 10:43:00 AM
Quite a passionate penning, beautiful lines and sentiments.
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Date: 1/3/2022 12:59:00 AM
A poem of fire and deep passion but with a touch of soft velvet. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/3/2022 3:57:00 PM
Love your comment, tom Thank you. PANGIE
Date: 1/1/2022 8:18:00 PM
Shocking! Sparks of love! The title caught my attention, and the poem kept it. Unique idea. Thanks, gw
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Date: 1/2/2022 1:53:00 AM
I liked the time too. What is better than love? Pangie
Date: 1/1/2022 4:06:00 PM
OH this speaks; beautiful lines.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2022 1:50:00 AM
HNY ML... thank you... Panagiota
Date: 1/1/2022 8:40:00 AM
Very beautiful, Pangie! You get a Fav!
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Date: 1/1/2022 9:57:00 AM
Prince DeMino.bless you for FAVING, I really like this one, too Gratefully Panagiota
Date: 1/1/2022 8:36:00 AM
Love this one, and I sure know THIS feeling!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/1/2022 9:54:00 AM
I am sooo glad you commented, and you shared your own experience. Love is the best! Gratefully Pangie
Date: 12/31/2021 8:04:00 PM
Wow Panagiota such exquisite words - and what a start to a new year - you are truly on fire...xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/31/2021 10:20:00 PM
Ann, hope I did well. You are correct, I am on fire!)) I hope your Eve was splendid! Love Pangie xx
Date: 12/31/2021 6:38:00 PM
Wowza Pangie! this is stunning! just beautiful :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/31/2021 10:15:00 PM
PS...i really like how it turnedout..i wish to thank you, Sleep well. Pangie

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