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A Rogue Black Bear

The Black Bears roam the mountain top Just before Dawn, you hear the “Hooo” The mating call Incessant : “ STOP!! “ Infects the mind, infecting : “ YOU “ My Black Soul travels Everywhere The Black Bears roam the mountain top My Dreams : I am a Rogue Black Bear “Hooo” “Hooo” “Hooo” ; I too, can not “STOP!! “ Hallucinogens : “ Quite a Crop “ Growing along the Forest floor The Black Bears roam the mountain top Eating Weeds off the Forest floor Insanity, Reality Imagination : “Do not “STOP”” Wandering Through “ Eternity “ The Black Bears roam the mountain top Author's Note : I Ask my POETRYSOUP Family To Critque this Quatern Thank-YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Dedicated to my "Sister Spirt" -- "Lynette Charchere" with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER

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Date: 11/20/2011 2:03:00 AM
I thought this poem was very interesting. It was definably worth reading. Thanks for all of the support and I hope you write more yourself! You are a fine poet! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:42:00 AM
As to the verse, pay a bit more attention to # of syllables per line ;) (there are beautiful babes in my blog for you go comment! ) Light & Love
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today HG my forever friend. It is wonderful seeing you sharing your heart. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 1:55:00 AM
this sounds so very amazing with much excitement! the mountain top(: there are so many stories we all can tell about our journey's to the mountains.. this is wonderful. it made me smile more than once! a Rogue Black Bear who may give the warmest of hugs. hah, very cute!, a fav. . & visions of your write that mean so much more. i love you always, Harry. ~Always&Forever your Sister Spirit, Lynn
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:34:00 AM
A spiritual write my dear HG..I can see you in my dreams as a black bear..so glad to see you post and Im sure Lynette will be thrilled. Love, BG
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