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A Road Still Driven

Searching here and there, hither and thither not knowing when to stop The road is long the path is narrow the hill so steep, is there a top? Each twist and turn, a new obstacle, something else to overcome But there is a way, a map for your world, no trail of biscuit crumb Love finds you when you are lost, when the mist swallows you up It clears away the storms; it keeps filled the cup from which you sup The road becomes a pathway, the pathway becomes a road The hill becomes level; love even carries that heavy load The road well driven may not be the best, just because it’s used oft Sometimes a change of direction helps find us when we are lost Our road still driven need not make us worry, and should never us daunt The road we are on needs a bump or two, it needs a little tease and taunt A road so straight and often used, becomes a boring drive We need a few little obstacles to remind us we are alive So take your love hold it close, use it to guide your way each day Then the road still driven will not be arduous, you will always find your way. © 10/12/2012 Entry For Contest 'A Road Still Driven'

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Date: 4/14/2020 12:45:00 AM
Re-reading this another gem from my Favourites,,didn't win in the contest, easy to know why,,it is to bloody smart for the judge...
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Date: 12/12/2012 2:35:00 AM
WHoa Mandy! This is full of wisdom - I like the thought of love saving the day. And where you said just because it's used alot it doesn't mean it's the best road- how true. And the part about bumps and bruises - very nice. The part that really gets to me is where you've said the road still driven need not make us worry - how often we choose impossible paths and then lament on our woes! This is an amazing write Mandy!
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Date: 12/12/2012 4:50:00 AM
Thanks Vicky love, pity Michael didn't rate it xx
Date: 12/11/2012 6:23:00 AM
Reads like a winner in the contest..Enjoyed reading today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Life is never easy for we have lessons to learn..I have got where I ask God what am I suppose to be learning here so that maybe I won't have to repeat a lesson..Thanks for your presence at my work with congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2012 4:50:00 AM
Thanks Sara but didn't place love and its always a pleasure to visit your work xx
Date: 12/10/2012 10:13:00 PM
that's a great attitude to take, to WANT for there to be obstacles on the road. Very wise of you, Mandy. Great job. not on the winner's list? I like what Constance said to you. I feel this way a lot when I see a poem I really like this one!
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Andy , you made my day xx
Date: 12/10/2012 1:50:00 PM
Mandy, I lover your poem, it is filled with great wisdom, and it is a winner to me. Constance
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Date: 12/11/2012 12:59:00 AM
Thanks Constance, that means s lot to me xx
Date: 12/10/2012 1:03:00 PM
very lovely write here, Mandy. Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 12/11/2012 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Jack xx
Date: 12/10/2012 12:35:00 PM
Nice one Mandy...Seren
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Date: 12/11/2012 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Sass xx
Date: 12/10/2012 10:32:00 AM
Superb write my friend Mandy..I like it..good luck in the contest..it's a sure winner for me. Hug/Love Maria
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Maria love , have a whisper in Michael's ear then sweetie xx
Date: 12/10/2012 9:04:00 AM
I love the metaphor. You've successfully directed the reader to understand the message in your penned words. It deserves a win Mandy. Have your self a Merry Little Christmas my friend. Warm Wishes Always & Forever, Connie
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Connie that means a lot to me xx
Date: 12/10/2012 8:37:00 AM
wow, this is surely one of your best, Mandy, the flow, the subject and the positivity, is inspiring.. another of yours to my fav...
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:08:00 AM
Thanks harry you are a pal xx

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