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A River Line Poem

Whither O willow weeping so free, do whisper to me the comings and goings of this flowing river we see; Hither O willow weeping so free, do whisper to me of hidden eddys and pools where freshwater life runs free, speak of your memories ,o beautiful and bless-ed tree. For Rick P's River line form contest (5 lines of 14 syllables)

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Date: 11/28/2016 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations Brian. 'Whisper to me' your poem does. Nice, Kai
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/28/2016 3:08:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Kai
Date: 11/27/2016 7:06:00 PM
The weeping willow is a witness :) Congrats, Brian!
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/28/2016 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 11/27/2016 6:39:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your Monorhyme, Brian. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/28/2016 12:02:00 AM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 11/26/2016 6:25:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Brian! Good luck in the contest. :)
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/26/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Tamal for your kind comment
Date: 11/25/2016 4:28:00 AM
A 7 Brian! Found it so beautiful!
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/25/2016 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Balveen for your very kind and encouraging words
Date: 11/15/2016 6:47:00 AM
This is beautiful, Brian:) a 7:)
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/15/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Jo for your always much valued comments.

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